User talk:Damaijin

First, let me thank you for your enthusiasm in editing on the wiki. You are really quite a talented writer and seem particularly knowledgeable about the 2003 anime series. You were already informed that the present tense is our standard for writing about events, but I'd also like to suggest that your addition to the Homunculus page is rather bloated. It's extremely well-written and informative, but contains a lot of information that would be better suited for other articles, such as the individual Homunculi's character pages. As such, I plan to trim it a good deal very soon (though, being rather well put together, I expect that won't be easy and I'll probably keep an unedited copy of it on either my talk page or yours). However, as it was very well written, I wonder if you'd look into editing other pages dealing with the 2003 anime series. Pages like the Edward Elric character page have essentially been perfected, but the Story sections regarding the 2003 anime are all rather weak. We don't have very many explicitly stated writing standards here, but if you follow the formats put in place for Manga storyline sections, you should be all right and if any problems come up, they will be addressed. CorbeauKarasu 01:47, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine to be a bit long-winded, it's just that certain pages call for more succinct writing. I was thinking of the 2003 anime series sections of the Edward Elric page, the Alphonse Elric page, the Roy Mustang page and Winry Rockbell page. While all the other sections of those pages are fine the way they are, you can see that our limited information regarding the 2003 storyline is a problem. I'm not asking you to do all of them if you don't want to and I'm certainly not putting any kind of deadline on them, but your style of writing and your knowledge of the 2003 series would likely put those specific sections where they need to be in terms of quality and information. If you follow the template put in place for the manga story sections of each page, I think you'll get the hang of the way we do things around here. if you'd like to help us out in that regard, you're more than welcome to it. CorbeauKarasu 17:39, April 17, 2012 (UTC)